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hey first of all, this needs some SERIOUS spacing and second - here's all my corrections The man rearranged the cubelets --- not a word --- on the old cube ...

Billy nodded, "Well. . . I guess you're right." Another phone-crazie went screaming past, and Kyle "slapped leather" and shot the woman in the head. "C'mon - let's go." "Go ...

--- possibly half-troll Prince Charming flitted from room to room, ordering around the maids and scullery boys, "No! No, no no! Not there! Over there!" The manservant carrying a huge ...

Wow - sounds like heaps of fun! Writing my profile now. Here's hoping I'm accepted! - jai PS - Janurary? Geez. . . *laughs* That's like, ages away.

Jenny nooded at Senna, "Maybe we should all build the shelter first. . . So we have somewhere to sleep tonight." Hyley grimaced, "I ain't sleepin' with no skirts!" Jenny ...

i know u said no mixes between the races, but can i be a Blood Dog?

Someone tapped him on the shoulder. Billy Ray started, and rolled to his feet, ready to attack if it was a phone-crazie. "Whoa there - easy dawg." The man said, ...

*** OOO! This is gonna be sooooo fun! I'm in! *** Name: Prince Charming of Nevermore, bastard son of King Henry the 8th *LAUGHS* Species: human (though his father believes ...

*** I'm glad you created this, Ma'am Kool, it's fun to write, and Nancy's a ball*** Cayman watched Nacy writhe on the ground, a small smile of satisfaction curling the ...

hey! another good piece for a 14 yr old! but here's the stuff I picked up: Danny was quite surprised to see the head --- here explain what kind of ...

Awesome story! Please continue with it. I'm just hoping Repunzel isn't the REAL Repunzel, otherwise that'd be totally out of whack. Hoping to read more! jai

first of all, nice story. second: A metal slug whizzed through the air, burying itself in the concrete. Fire illuminated the scene: gunfire, pounding through the door like it was ...

Good story. though awkwardly written. first off, because it starts off as a memoir, the reader know that the story teller isn't dead. Therefore, we know he's overcome all the ...

hey... i, for one, read all of your story. it was surprisingly good. it has a plot, good diolouge and the right amount of characters. i didn't like Part Two ...