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Re: The Liberal-Fascist Party Manifesto
loved everything but the racism one. . . . ^^ Vote Sureal, as he is So Real about our wants and need of our nation! Hoo-ha!
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Re: The President of Iran Is Sick And Deranged
Just to let you know, I did read it. . . But I think this type of thing would be better off in a Blog, and also, the two "cats" ...
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Re: APPETITE
Awesome story until it stopped unexpectedly. The one thing that tripped me up was when you (or the speaker, whateverz) said that the boy was shut up in the outhouse ...
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Re: (no title...yet) Chapter 1
Hey! This was a fun story to read! Below are the mistakes I stumbled on (hardly any at all! *shock horror*): -------------------- I watched my mother with the most bored ...
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Re: The Bed of Debauchery
*laughs* Another absolutely crazy story! What do you eat before you go to sleep!?!?!? Thanks for a laugh! Cheers. - jai -
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Re: I am God's Ventriloquist
Crazy! Insane! *shakes head* What did I just read!?! *laughs* This was wonderfully crazy! Absolutely insane!!!! This is excellent writing. Surprisingly. Though this would be better received at - they ...
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Re: Slayers!
Ayra: I think she means your CHARACTER has to be 14 - not you, the writer. Geek and FantasyArtist: And as for the levels - it's relatively simple (me and ...
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Re: There's a Rumour in Saint Petersburg
First of all, TERRIFIC! Marvelous! Outstanding! Captivating! The ending was just a dream! (of course I don't mean an actual dream, but, "Wow, that girl is a dream." sort of ...
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Re: The Exiles and their fate
Hey! This reminded me, strangely perhaps, of the prologues in David Eddings novels in the Belgarion series. In other words, I liked it, but some of the words did trip ...
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Re: Dark Beginings
*** Excellent point, Sylverdawn! I really think having so many magical creatures walking together is very unusual. I think everyone just got carried away. . . So, if anyone wants ...
Dec 30, 2007 - Re: Dark Beginnings DT Dec 30, 2007
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Re: Title Unknown
Hey, Wow! Great story! Beginning sucked me right in! Below are the mistakes I stumbled upon: ------------------ I died ten years ago in a plane crash. Convient --------- convenient -------- ...
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Re: Alone - The Beginning
*post taken by the same things that steal all my right socks*
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Re: The Vet
Hey! fiver: . . . *guilty* yeah. It was a predictable outcome - I was going to have the vet eat it himself or something, raw, "Dr. Stevenson raised the ...
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Re: Alone - The Beginning
ALONE September 5, 2021, 10:40AM Washington Square Park, New York I stood under the shade of a withered tree. Nondescript and grey, it was slumped to one side as if ...
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