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10/10/08 Michael, My dearest Michael. My dear dear Michael. I don't know what I'm doing. I don't know why I'm doing it. It's disgusting that the only thing I can ...

What? *confused* Eh? What did I just read? =( This wasn't bad. . . it just had no climax at all. The writing in itself was okay, maybe even perfect, ...

Dude, is it alright if I stalk you? Because I'm seriously contemplating it if all your works are as good as this one and Corporate. Off to go check out ...

Hey Playerj09 Sorry for the harsh review before - I guess I was a tad angry at seeing such unedited mess littered in the forum I was exploring. Thank you ...

Fantastic!! Absolutely wonderful! I was a bit daunted by the length at first, but the way you write is just so entertaining, that it didn't take long for me to ...

Neat. Liked it much better than "How you broke my heart" which I just couldn't. . . gah. Anyway - this was a fantastic idea (funny how you came to ...

Fantastic! I wasn't suspecting that ending *at all*! If the ending had been a person, I would have committed a double-take. Chocoholic seems to think it was cliched, but I ...

JosephDean has provided you with some excellent advice, and I don't think he's missed anything at all. I thought the descriptions throughout this were excellent, and this was a pleasure ...

So you've reviewed someone's work once, and posted 12 times yourself - and you joined just today. Here at YWS, we have this little policy, "One review to every two ...

Is it still too late to join now? This sounds really interesting.

Besides the fact that it was obvious that the main character was a vampire, that a beautiful girl is alone in a building that is all but falling apart, that ...

To be honest, I skipped the beginning part - well, I skimmed it. The actual story story was interesting. The sex part was, "What the f*ck did she do this ...

I like this, Jaz. I really do. I have no idea why you've only got one review on this piece. If everything you wrote was as well written as this. ...

I liked this. A bit repetitive with the word "fuck(ed)", but I can understand how it is used to some dramatic effect. The whole thing is a bit cliched - ...