seeminglymeaningless

Hey Riven :) First, the boring stuff: The sun was just beginning to set as I was walking home. I looked around and enjoyed myself as much as I could ...

He didn't answer for several moments, making the hairs on the back of Gulford's neck rise with warning. Abruptly King Harry turned and beckoned a finger at his standard bearer, ...

Sorry guys, not accepting yet until the plot etc is worked out, need to organize it with my friend halfway across the country, and this is the easiest way to ...

I think, mandapanda, the problem everyone else seems to have is that because you've posted this in the short story category, it means that your story starts and finishes with ...

I didn't review Elinor's review, otherwise I would have been looking at her use of syntax, grammar and lexicon etc. Instead, I was suggesting to mandapanda that she doesn't have ...

Hey :) First of all, you should probably rate this as R, as we don't want any 12 year olds reading this and having nightmares. Second, here's my sentence by ...

Wow, Elinor tore you a new one :s I, however, enjoyed your story. I'm not a horse story person myself, having had to endure countless poems about them on deviantArt, ...

Hey Roon, awesome review! I'm sorry I haven't been online lately. . . been busy with uni; exams etc. Aaanyway. Here's the next part if you're still keen on reading. ...

lol the whole Aiisha and Robert thing wasn't my idea. In fact, I really got angry and annoyed with it. The argument made things very uneasy at home :P I ...

Prologue: In the times that followed the Purges, all Mages lived in fear. They spent their lives in hiding, rarely did groups meet, and when they did an awkward understanding ...

Roon, "until the sun was far down." Shall add something about a horizon - not my writing :P Quote: The day had went more painfully for Aiisha The whole orc ...

Rohan :) Haven't seen you on MSN much either. How's life been treating you? And yeah, it's a bit long, so there was no need to even read it :P ...

Roon, once again, thanks for your critique :P Trenchcoat is two words, but it's fantasy :P Roll with it. "Kahlak'tisht whistled to himself and averted his eyes, but the act ...

Roon, you didn't need to reply so quickly, but I am rather pleased you did. I love defending myself :P The whole "cutting my (yes, losses, not loses) losses you ...

Roon, every critique is a worthy critique. You certainly didn't waste any time - you picked up on some things I might have missed otherwise. On the origins of "seedy" ...