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EDIT: So, I have now extended the beginning to show you the whole Prologue :D EDIT EDIT : Have added the map as well. Thank you to everyone who has ...

Returning your *awesome* favour with my own review :) Peace, peace, I scolded myself. Should what the Main Character be thinking be in italics? Losing wasn’t an option, either. My ...

EDIT: CHANGED THE STORY! YAY! Thanks to everyone who's helped me turn this extremely undeveloped beginning to what it is now. --------------- Rachael: Gah, so sorry it took so long ...

I didn't want to make a whole new topic about it, but my question is regarding animated avatars (you don't have anything about in your FAQ, nor has anyone asked ...

Hey Rachael - this was a fantastically speedy reply on your half; you're a critique daemon :P Your bribe/threat was so intriguing I came right over and read. lol, I ...

I'm really surprised no one has bribed you yet o.O As soon as I found your thread, I couldn't help but ask for a review because I badly wanted to ...

Hey WaterLily :) You sure you feel like reviewing? :P This piece , which doesn't have a title per se, but is about a battle, has received some fantastic reviews ...

o.O I swear, on anything you would like me to swear on, that I never ever saw that checklist on Reply screens until you just said they were there. Ever ...

. . . omg. I'm so sorry. I don't ever use the "Quick Reply" button, so I never realized. Gosh, I'm an idiot. Well then. Now that I'm aware of ...

Hey Bick :) I will return reviews for this. You don't have to, but if you did want to spend some time on this battle scene I wrote, then that ...

Thanks Rosey and Stella for pointing out to me where the checklist is hiding :P I should frequent the Advanced Critique area more often. "Reviewing Checklist: Did I give a ...

If you want an awesome reason to research possession/transformation, I suggest watching Jekyll , a BBC production of Jekyll and Hyde. It's a good fall back; it shows the changes ...

rofl. No one wants to read about a perfect character? True enough, I suppose, but don't go the absolute opposite just to please people. No one wants to read about ...

All I can think of when I hear multiple POVs that sound the same regardless of whether or not the character was stated at the top, is the Baby Sitters ...

That's interesting - a big town girl moving to the sticks. Why not have her neighbours help her family unpack? Maybe she really didn't want to move, so she started ...