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Hey Rachael :) Glad to see something of yours up! :D She liked the way the T-shirt hung from his shoulders . It was blue like water , and like ...

Hey again, I see you've changed things :P Here to review :) The diamond necklace was like broken glass in her hands, exuding some harsh innate gleam. Once it had ...

Hey Lethero :) Here to review. *This all I got so far, but I just took some medicine and am too tired to continue. I'll get more up soon.* First ...

Hey BlackBird, dropping by to review. Repetition, if there is any, in green. She stared above at the slow revolving slice of the ceiling fan, imagined her throat bared to ...

Hey, thanks for the review (again), Kiwi! :D From the looks of things you've had quite a lot of in depth feedback on this. lol yes. Extensive feedback. All of ...

Wow - massive thanks to both of you for taking the time out not only to read but properly review. There's stories that demand help because they are so broken, ...

Quick post: This is what the beginning was like before I changed it to dialogue. Should I change it back to this? It was before dawn, when the grass was ...

I go very in depth and I can spend paragraphs dissecting a single sentence. Yes *laughs* you do :) Thank you so much for the review! It's what I needed, ...

Hey Dawn :) Repetition in green, if there is any, comments in bold. I've noticed that you haven't spaced out your story for the sake of the readers on YWS, ...

Hey :) First off, maybe you should take your story out of the quote formatting, and put your Author's Note as a quote, or even hide it with a spoiler ...

Here to critique, little sister *awesome face* I’m trying to break free, (A poor sparrow, me, wishes to burst into the sky) Of this mould which tries to shape me, ...

I feel really greedy wanting more reviews of my story, but every single review ends up in a major transformation. I'm not kidding. If you do choose to review the ...

Thank you for reviewing my work, Rosie. You did an impressive and in depth critique! I hope other people approach you to review your work, as everything you said about ...

I actually changed the story already, Rach :P I've even uploaded the map I drew of the continent. But I'll address all your points anyway :P I think it's important ...

Hey, I thought it would be better to place this here, seeing as it's not urgent and if any moderators decided to pop into this thread, well at least I'm ...