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Re: Prologue, maybe? Advice?
Hey :) Initial reactions: 1) This woman is a weak person, hanging onto a relationship that the reader knows won't last. I'm hoping that this story goes beyond the cliché ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: The Death of Another Salesman
Lol! What a fantastic little read :P I think we all have this fantasy, and reading this short story was quite satisfying to the little murderer in me. [/size][/size][/size][/size] Is ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Clowns.
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Fallacies
I will make sure I put these points to good use, Snoink, thank you for outlining them for me. And onto my reply: No one at all will know these ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: SPEW
I feel like there's an in-joke between the moderators and I'm missing out :(
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Israel, Iran and Palestine, what should be done about them?
I have read none of the previous replies (except to check that this hasn't already been done), but I have the solution to this problem. Well, technically I didn't come ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Abortions? Yay or Nay?
Wow Snoink, someone could base a whole essay off your reply :P My answer? If I got pregnant right now (well... you know, as soon as I realized I was ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: My Flotsam Love, Part I
Just a quick heads up, no one will read your work if you flood a forum with your stuff, ESPECIALLY if your other poems prior to this have no comments. ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Flee, A Haiku
This is entirely off-topic, but I've now come up with an incredible idea, and I had to share it with you, considering the fact that your work inspired me. I ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: lyrics *copyrighted*
First: You're perfect, straight facade "Your", and "façade". Second: Saying, "lyrics *copyrighted* could be one of the biggest turn-offs when browsing through the forums ever. Never ever say somethin
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: White Demons Prologue
I'm not quite sure what to make of this. It's too short to really leave an impression on me. Even prefaces aren't normally this short. Prefaces are generally an out-take ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: Untitled (Essay about me)
I realize it's a bit late to be replying, but if you could tell us the parameters of the essay and what you're required to write about, then we'd be ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: Old Story
Hi Makar. A few things I noticed straight away (considering the fact that this is in historical fiction etc) that you might want to do some research on. 1) The ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: Picking Flowers ch.1
Hey :) I quite liked this first chapter. It set the scene very well, and I'm interested in seeing how you pan out the story. There were a few things ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: Saving Lilly~Chapter Seven
I'll read this whole series and comment on every single chapter if you format the posts so that I can read them without straining my eyes. Go from this: “Welcome ...
Aug 29, 2010
