seeminglymeaningless

Hey guys! Thanks for the review. If I have learnt one thing at all, it's: post only in small increments. And I apologize for making you guys read that huge ...

Hey, here to review whilst eating the rest of the red wine jelly that was in the fridge: A time-wearied farmer raised his fist in anger at her haste the ...

!!! Am so sad! *laments tearfully to herself over her breakfast* ... *takes a bite of food* ... *wails* !!! That was so awful! I can't believe I managed to ...

What an interesting read! It was very well written, and I could find no grammar, syntax or other glaring errors besides this one: I hated being the hero by your ...

You forgot to correct the formatting on this one :P Dear reader, My name will stay unknown to you. I will trust you are a good enough citizen to save ...

First, this seemed like way too weird the way it is. I think it should go into the previous chapter. You'd have to extend that memory scene a bit more ...

Hey, here to review - apparently we're not going to Sizzlers :( Day thirty two, thought Lilly-Lynne as she marked a line on the wall. Thirty-two days she’d been in ...

Well, I kinda said I would read every chapter of Saving Lilly if you formatted everything correctly, and well, here I am. A lonesome balloon floated down steadily in the ...

You should "hide" this from the public. - Jai

So, I did some quick digging, and I can confidently say that your use of grammar has definitely improved from the original: Sky said hello to Sophie this morning it ...

Hey there, Things I can see straight away: 1) You need to format your story to suit the YWS website. There needs to be extra enter spaces between paragraphs to ...

Hi. I'm not going to review your work for the same reasons why everyone else is not reviewing your work. 1) You have flooded the forum with three consecutive chapters ...

Back again to add all the stuff I didn't have time to write about in my first post. First Stanza I felt that this stanza was absolutely unrelated to the ...

Hey, I stumbled across your work :P I sit in the bottom of the shower And let the water clean me of your kisses. I like this first coupling, it's ...

Sorry for not replying to this earlier, I was working on my university project going towards my bachelor of Secondary Education, (major English/Physics). Anywho. I agree with RachaelWater's comments a