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Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Hey guys :D Completed/Status Coat of Many Colors by Calligraphy COMPLETE! 4/4 Musketeers have reviewed. Hope you enjoyed our reviews :) -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Postman
Hey Spiky One without a Home :) I'm here representing one of the four Musketeers. One for all! And all for one! Thank you for visiting our WRFF thread. The ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Coat of Many colors [edited]
Hey Calligraphy :) I'm here representing one of the four Musketeers . One for all! And all for one! Thank you for visiting our WRFF thread. On to the review ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Bullet Wounds
So this is a short story I submitted for SKin's contest :) Review/comment. Thankss (: Probably should take this author's note out/put it in spoilers. Also, when writing an author's ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Leave it to the DYNAMIC DUO The Dynamic Duo: Light_Devil (the Dragon Lady) and me (the Necromancer) would love to review your work :) Basically, if you ask for a ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Dreamstate
Hey Awesome :) Welcome back to YWS :P First impression: I like the feel of the story. The dark atmosphere you're attempting to create works well in the context of ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Dreamstate
A ding. . . ding. . . ding . . became DING-DING-DING, I think you should have described the ding becoming louder instead of just capitalizing the word 'Ding'. I ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Dreamstate
Hi guys. Below is a prophetic dream sequence from a novel I'm co-writing with my sister, called Reprisal . I need to make this less coherent and more... weird. Any ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
lol that was fantastic, the ending was awesome :) I found no errors, though regarding script formatting, you don't need to use quotation marks if you've used cues like "Ron:", ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: How to be a Fictional Writer (Short Story)
This was my first assignment in my Writer's Craft class.. We were given a the poem How To Be a Poet by Wendell Berry and told to do something of ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Race/Ethnicity in Education
If anyone was slightly interested (lol), this is what my project ended up like. When I receive my results, I'll post an update. It was a poster assignment. I wish ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hey Skins, long time no see/begging for reviews :) I doubt you'll remember, but a long time ago, you reviewed something of mine at the time called "The Battle". It ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Untitled As of now (Formerly Mark of the Stones)
Hey. First, if you haven't noticed, it's kinda hard to read bunched up text the way you've submitted your story. It would be so much easier to read if you ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Vanished Prolouge
Good afternoon, First and foremost, you spelled "prologue" wrong in your title. Things I noticed immediately after reading for the first time: 1) I know I'm not the only person ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: FREAK
Hey :) You helped me with my physics, and I hope I can provide some input for your novel :) From what I can remember of the old version, this ...
Sep 8, 2010
