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One of the Four Musketeers, Jai here. I’d always hated hospitals. The bland colours, the hushed voices, the hard, plastic waiting room chairs and the people with blank faces. What ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, reviewing as requested. I stared in front of me, unsure of what to do. Oliver and I were standing side by side as ...

Hiya, Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers. First, why/when did Oliver leave his phone at Victoria's place? “Your stop, love.” The ruff sound of the bus driver's voice grumbled ...

I think Light_Devil mentioned this earlier, but you're probably getting sick of seeing, "Jai, one of the Four Musketeers here, reviewing upon request", but it's necessary to draw other people ...

After reading over the chapters, I realised that I hadn't edited them at all. I could have sworn that I had... I've actually edited them on the MicrosftWord document, just ...

Heya guys. We're a bit backlogged, here in Frace, but we'll try our best to keep up with the requests. Currently I have two assignments due, one on physics due ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, here to continue reviewing your novel. Yay! Victoria gets what she deserves. This was the best written chapter so far, not only because ...

Wow, what a deep story. You did a tremendous job managing to write about a doctor living under the sea and forgetting names. Many people would have taken the easy ...

Jai here, continuing to review your novel as one of the Four Musketeers. First, your spoiler: Victoria Kingston must be married by the time she's eighteen. At the moment, she's ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, continuing to review your novel, as requested. I think you should put your author's notes at the end, or in a spoiler, as ...

Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, as requested. On my plate there was a huge pile of sliced chicken breast and an uncomfortably large dump of mash potato. There ...

Hey Skins, here to review as requested, representing the Four Musketeers :) It's an extremely rough draft. I'd hope not after 10 reviews ;) My father was determined on finding ...

Now, you have some seriously, and I mean seriously, good reviews on this already. I sure do! Everyone who has review has been fantastic :) The reason why I requested ...

Hey Rosie :D Here as one of the four Musketeers to review at your service :) First, wow! This has been expanded like a bazillion times more! Well done! Now ...

We'll hop to it :D Playthings by iceprincess COMPLETE! 4/4 Musketeers have reviewed. A shot of Arrogance by Skins Under review. Chapter One 2/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far. Chapter ...