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Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter One - Old)
:P Just here to say that I'm glad you decided to rearrange things and make everything fit so well. Doesn't it just flow now? You had it all there, it ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: The Maharaja
Wow. Just wow. This was fantastic! I was a little daunted by the length, and the strange titles and names that I wasn't accustomed to, but this story, this retelling ...
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Re: [September Contest] Wishes and Stars
Hey :) This was a well written story, with a sweet message :) Here are the things that I noticed: “Yes!” they both shouted. While there would be strong emotion ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Box (Or 2012)
Hi :) The small things: What if the prophet was incorrect? Or worse, a sham? What would that mean for his country (but more importantly, for his Presidency)? What could ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: The Pink Pill.
Hey Emilie, I would suggest hiding your author's note in a spoiler, especially when you have mistakes within it. First: I can immediately see that you don't have enough paragraphs. ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Memories [Chapter 7]
Entering this chapter having never read the previous ones, I have to admit that this is some really good writing and that this piece shouldn't have been in the "Recent ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Creative Writing.. Please read :)
Hi :) First off, you should put your author's note in a spoiler so that we know when your actual piece begins and so that your note does not detract ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: DOCTOR WHO - Attack of the Time Flies (Parts 1-4)
Eudora's outfits having 3/4 sleeves was supposed to suggest the type of character she is? :P lol, yeah, well when you mentioned 3/4th sleeves, I assumed something like this: I ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: - Deleted -
You deserve a medal for your reviews. I wouldn't go that far :P But thanks for the compliment :D I'm certainly going to recommend The Four Musketeers to other people ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Reprisal - Prologue + Chapter One
Hiya Skins :) I'm not here to review the first chapter right now, but I will promise you that it will be done by tomorrow. lol, there's no rush :) ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Completed/Status Attack of the Time Flies by Nephthys Under review. 2/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far. Nice script! :)
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: DOCTOR WHO - Attack of the Time Flies (Parts 1-4)
Hey Nep :) I'm Jai, one of the four Musketeers, at your service! First thing: I loved this script. It's so well laid out and you look like you really ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Beauty's Beast
Hi Girl :) I'm Jai, one of the Four Musketeers, here upon your request at our WRFF thread. On to the review. Prologue. Once upon a time there was a ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] It's What I Do
Hey UltraViolet :) Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers who will be reviewing your work, as requested. You received a whole heap of fantastic reviews already, and I didn't ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: - Deleted -
Hey Skins, Jai here, reviewing on behalf of 1/4th of the Four Musketeers :) On to the review. “Whoa! Frickin’ hell, Tori. You sure as hell know how to scare ...
Sep 15, 2010
