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Hi Nutty, I'm Jai :3 The opening paragraph was amazing. Just saying :P It was completely attention-grabbing and it made me absolutely eager to read more. Sam and his captain ...

Hiya Silent, I'm Jai :D Just wow, this story was really good. It was chilling. I was thinking the whole time, Murder him! Smother him with a pillow! I couldn't ...

Hey Ryan. Jai here :3 No “Zarathustra” played as we rounded the crown of Gaia. Looking through the six-inch window mounted on the sleeping-cabin wall, I imagined Strauss’s cold ascent ...

Hey Elinor :) Jai here to review. If you're going to stick literally to the email concept, perhaps you should also include a time stamp, and the email addresses of ...

Hey Lyn, I'm Jai :3 Time. The only thing he needed was time. This really reminded me of the movie Dear John, when Savanah wrote to John about how her ...

Hey Pigeon, Jai here to review. He dressed quickly, filled his pocket with pencils and grabbed his sketch book, then made his way down to the street and wandered towards ...

Howdy Croc :) Jai here, after procrastinating. I read this about five hours ago and was going to review it, but got caught up with playing DotA amongst other things. ...

Hey, I'm Jai :) Little kids, heavily kitted with winter gear. One smiled at him. He returned the gift. Hmm, all your sentences are really short and really descriptive. The ...

Hey Wario :) Jai here. Wow, I love the beginning. Nice foreshadowing. “Damn it!” I said, hitting my fist against the cold metal. There was no way I could pay ...

Hey Ben, Jai here :) I have this skill to get ‘em back into the read though; ‘tis a secret that my teacher told me one day: BANG! Apparently it ...

Why wouldn't you? Have you heard of the pleasure-button experiment? In 1954 James Olds and Peter Milner of McGill University discovered that the septal region is the feel-good center of ...

It's not ethical, but sometimes I wish it didn't matter. I feel as if there should be a mandatory course on how to raise a child and the potential parent ...

Hey Rosie :) Wanna review my submission for the September Contest? SNAFU You don't have to, of course :) - Jai

I really enjoyed this poem, the rhyming didn't sound forced until the last stanza. Don’t lose yourself in to the throng, I promise smiling isn’t wrong. Each of us has ...

Howdy, Persephoneia. Jai here :) It had been poorly textured, and, as hungry as I was, it still managed to be somewhat nauseating. What do you mean by poorly textured? ...