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Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Oh noes! Now I have to go review it :P Ha ha :P Am right on it, Skins. I like being prompted to do things, makes me feel like I'm ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Blood Type (Open to all!)
Cherry "Coahl," she whispered, nudging him with her elbow as she picked up a few dirty plates from an empty table, "Check out the guy eating at table six. Looks ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] SNAFU
I thought this was pretty good. Vivid action, good storytelling, and all in all a good brisk read. But, there's always something we could work on! I hope so :P ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
haha, that's funny XD By the way, I think...I love you :3 Bahaha, just kidding. But seriously, I'm super psyched that you actually came to review this for me! Thank ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The bots want to join Review Day too
The bots are... real people?
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
Hey Shear :) Was going to review these all the other day, but Persephoneia beat me to it on exactly the same day, and I had noticed that we had ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Blood Type (Open to all!)
Cherry "How much money have we got this week for your groceries?" Cherry asked Coahl, rummaging around in her purse for spare change. Coahl sighed and leaned against the worn ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
^ This sounds like it would make an awesome movie. Could you imagine the explosions and big balls of lightning? Not to mention the fight scenes. It'd be as awful ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Blood Type (Open to all!)
Hey :) Mind if I join? Name: Cherrize (Cherry) Walter Age: 17 Species: Vampire Blood Type: A- Side: For, but despises herself Appearance: Cherry is of Spanish descent, so her ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: How difficult life could be - Chapter 1
Hey! Thanks Jai. At first, I thought twice about the review you gave but now, I think I'm pretty much understanding what you meant. That's great! I'm sorry if I ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Reprisal - Prologue + Chapter One
@Everyone: I printed off a hard copy of Reprisal in its entirety, and my sister and I are currently editing it. I have gone through all the comments again and ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: The Pain of Glass
Hey Kitty :3 Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers. The glasses slid away from his face as if repulsed by the dark, curled moustache congealed with alcohol. lol. While ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: I've Already Tried ~contest entry~
Hey :) Jai here, 1/4th of the Four Musketeers who will eventually review your work ;) My mom left three years ago. That’s when it started, my father’s death. I ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: Anyone Need A Review??
Woah - I read one of your reviews and it was incredibly in-depth and awesome. If you're up for it, would you mind reviewing a novel I'm co-writing with my ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: How difficult life could be - Chapter 1
Hey Chetan, Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers. First, just quickly, "pleas" is the plural of "plea", as in, "My plea is that you keep me alive.". Continuing this ...
Sep 24, 2010
