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Re: The Tavern
Jai wakes up from her unconscious position on the floor and looks around with bleary eyes. She struggles to her feet and shrugs; must've drank too much.
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Pain of Glass
Hi :) I've been away for a month and now I'm back. Got about 40 emails/topics to visit and you're first :3 I'm glad you received a high mark for ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Race/Ethnicity in Education
Hey guys, just thought I'd post up my grade :) I got a 6-, the highest possible grade at my university is a 7. A 6- is at least 75/100%, ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: My Boy
Hey :) It's 3:41am here in Australia, so if this review isn't coherent, I apologize :3 First, I'm not entirely sure what this poem was supposed to be about. It ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Read Once Immediately Preceding Sleep
Hi. First, I am going to review this because of one thing. [√-1
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: A short Halo respawn story
Hey Grizzy! Welcome to YWS. I loved the premise of this story. Just quickly, here's a few things to note. Generally author's put their notes in italics, or in a ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part one)
Hey IG, I'm Jai. So, first off I'll tell you this quickly, though you don't need to listen to me. But I've been on YWS a long time, and this ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [3]
Wai herro thar, Shear :3 “Like he always sits next to the window like a freaking ghost and never says anything.” lolwut? Do you mean, "he always sits next to ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [2]
Hey Shear :3 Finally here to review. Stab me for my lateness :D I grabbed it and vigorously brushed my teeth, glaring at my mirror image. Without toothpaste? Ewww :P ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Ten)
Hey Skins :) Just a few things I noticed: Ollie reached into the bag again and pulled out three large cans of cider. “If you’re really good, you can get ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: The Pain of Glass
Hey, sorry about the late reply. I got a high 2:1 so that's good but now I want to make it something I'd be proud to put in my portfolio. ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
A shot of Arrogance by Skins Under review. Chapter Nine 1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far. Chapter Ten 0/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far. Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Chapter 1)
Heya Maddy! Jai here again, reviewing for 1/4th of the Four Musketeers! Today… May 3rd It might be beneficial to include a year stamp as well, to make the "eight ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Prologue)
Hey Maddy! Thanks for asking for four reviews from the Four Musketeers! I'm Jai, and I'll be your first reviewers. *sigh* about the other reviewers, you might be waiting a ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Nine)
Hey Skins! There should be an electric prodder to stab people over the internet - that would get my attention :P Here to review finally . I owe you some ...
Sep 29, 2010
