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Re: (Unnamed) Chapter one (Rewriten)
Hi Stealth :) Some quick pointers before I start my actual review: 1) Try placing your Author's Notes in spoilers so that they don't detract from the actual story 2) ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: I Slept Alone
Hi Nightshade. I recently watched Requiem, a German film with English subtitles and it was so bad it depressed me. So if my review is harsh, please forgive me. Light ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: To Die Young
Hi Snickers. This is a really touching topic and poem you've decided to share with us at YWS. I think you'll find no one has reviewed because no one wants ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Your* Poem's Title is Probably In This One
Hi :) This was a really interesting idea, Kat. I think it would make more sense/look better if every poem title was in italics, or a different type of font ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*
Hi Jash. That was chilling to watch. I hope your novels match the epicness of that trailer. You can't imagine the anticipation I'm feeling right now :3 - Jai
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Hi idraax, done! :D Anyone else?
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: More snippets!
Hi Idraax, here to review as requested :D I'm sun burnt and tired, but it was a great day :3 Onto the review. Other scenes of mine, that don't relate ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Hiya Skins! Here to review :3 In case anyone was wondering, Aeron is pronounced like A-ron. It's a Welsh thing... Just go with it... Aaron is a strange name for ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Good morning, Idraax! Today is my boyfriend's birthday, so as soon as we get back from Wet 'n' Wild (water amusement park), I will hop right to reviewing: More Snippets ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Tavern
Jai suddenly lurched to her feet from the bar stool, "Witches?" In one fluid movement, she vaulted over the bar and ducked down behind the heavy structure, "They're after me!"
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Come one, come all! Here to review, staying to review, won't be leaving until I have reviewed so much my fingers blacken and fall off. So link me to whatever's ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Werewolf/witch Trials
Essentially, those accused of a serious crime were put through a trial by ordeal. The type of ordeal varied, but common ones were to stick your hands into a boiling ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Redemption - Prologue + Chapter 1
Hiya Quibbler :) I'm Jai. First off, perhaps placing your Author's Note in a spoiler would be a good idea. Certainly not necessary, but it detracts less from the story ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Deaths Shadow
Hi :) I'm Jai, and I'll be reviewing your work today. First, I think you mean "Death's Shadow" to be your title. Secondly, I would hear the ryhming in the ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Nine)
@ Seeminglymeaningless - Don't worry about taking long to review! :P 2 months long enough? :P I agreed with what you said about the order of the happenings in the ...
Nov 13, 2010
