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  • WRFF Archive Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~

    Anyone want a review? I'm a few reviews behind my quota of two-three reviews a day for this year! Woot for New Year Resolutions!

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Smoke

    Hullo Wayward, you ask and you shall receive. Before I begin my review though, I'd like to draw attention to the way you've submitted your story. Whilst the huge block ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Artful Creatures

    Hi Cloud, sorry for the late check up. Been studying and all that jazz. Anywho, here I am to review the prologue of Artful Creatures. I really enjoyed Chapter One, ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • General Articles Re: fixing the national debt

    Hi Samuel :) I'm Jai. There is a problem that persists in this great country, The United States of America, which is holding us back form out true potential as ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Artful Creatures Chapter 1

    Hey Cloud, welcome to YWS. Before I begin the actual review, I would like to start by talking about formatting. While the way you've submitted this chapter is fine, if ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Fallen Civilazation Chapter 1

    EDIT: You also spelt "civilization" wrong in your title. Depending on your country, "civilization" can be spelt like that, or civilisation. - Jai Hey Nate. I'll be your reviewer today. ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook

    :) I guess 2010 has been a funny year for me in terms of YWS attendance. Came back sometime around the midpoint of the year, then took off again and ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • YWS Re: critique: line by line, or general?

    When not to do a line critique: -- when, in any format, the writer is so novice and the piece so full of errors that pointing out every singe one ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Miscellaneous Re: Quote Tips - Navi's Writing Discoveries 2010

    Fantastic idea, Navi :) Sophistication and the mainstream do not go well together. Not sure if I agree with this one. It depends on your personal definition of sophistication, I ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)

    Hi Nate :) Just for the people who can't help themselves regarding any sort of word count limit (ie, me), what are the maximum lengths of each literary piece? Like, ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)

    Woooo, huuge chapter :P But I can't complain - I mean, look at Reprisal :P Anyway, on to the review :) Community service... They were kidding, right? Cleaning up a ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~

    Tiger, Nep, yours are done, on to Skins :3 Can You See Me?: Chapter Two by Skins Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyone ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Kiss of Death: Chapter Two (Part 1)

    Hey Tiger, half of the Dynamic Duo here to review :) I swear Azrael will come around eventually, but she's about nineteen reviews behind :3 Anyway, on to the review! ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Hey guys :) Time of Incident: Last night, Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:30 pm, Australia Browser: Firefox Page You Were On: Link Describe What Happened: Posted a review, and the ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)

    Hi :) Wow, you've got a whole lot of reviews on this already, so I apologise if I repeat what anyone else has said (I haven't read over the other ...

    Nov 30, 2010


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