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Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Anyone want a review? I'm a few reviews behind my quota of two-three reviews a day for this year! Woot for New Year Resolutions!
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Smoke
Hullo Wayward, you ask and you shall receive. Before I begin my review though, I'd like to draw attention to the way you've submitted your story. Whilst the huge block ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Artful Creatures
Hi Cloud, sorry for the late check up. Been studying and all that jazz. Anywho, here I am to review the prologue of Artful Creatures. I really enjoyed Chapter One, ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: fixing the national debt
Hi Samuel :) I'm Jai. There is a problem that persists in this great country, The United States of America, which is holding us back form out true potential as ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Artful Creatures Chapter 1
Hey Cloud, welcome to YWS. Before I begin the actual review, I would like to start by talking about formatting. While the way you've submitted this chapter is fine, if ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Fallen Civilazation Chapter 1
EDIT: You also spelt "civilization" wrong in your title. Depending on your country, "civilization" can be spelt like that, or civilisation. - Jai Hey Nate. I'll be your reviewer today. ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
:) I guess 2010 has been a funny year for me in terms of YWS attendance. Came back sometime around the midpoint of the year, then took off again and ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: critique: line by line, or general?
When not to do a line critique: -- when, in any format, the writer is so novice and the piece so full of errors that pointing out every singe one ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Quote Tips - Navi's Writing Discoveries 2010
Fantastic idea, Navi :) Sophistication and the mainstream do not go well together. Not sure if I agree with this one. It depends on your personal definition of sophistication, I ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)
Hi Nate :) Just for the people who can't help themselves regarding any sort of word count limit (ie, me), what are the maximum lengths of each literary piece? Like, ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Woooo, huuge chapter :P But I can't complain - I mean, look at Reprisal :P Anyway, on to the review :) Community service... They were kidding, right? Cleaning up a ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Tiger, Nep, yours are done, on to Skins :3 Can You See Me?: Chapter Two by Skins Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyone ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Kiss of Death: Chapter Two (Part 1)
Hey Tiger, half of the Dynamic Duo here to review :) I swear Azrael will come around eventually, but she's about nineteen reviews behind :3 Anyway, on to the review! ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Hey guys :) Time of Incident: Last night, Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:30 pm, Australia Browser: Firefox Page You Were On: Link Describe What Happened: Posted a review, and the ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)
Hi :) Wow, you've got a whole lot of reviews on this already, so I apologise if I repeat what anyone else has said (I haven't read over the other ...
Nov 30, 2010
