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Re: Once Again
There's not much to say here, because as is this text is virtually perfect. It certainly is an interesting idea, and I would be completely fascinated if you continued this. ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
Wow, I only read up to page four. But all I can think are these two things (inevitable when religion was brought into the debate): 1) God created Man in ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Royal Pain
Hey, I'm Jai and I'll be reviewing today :3 I was here for my parents, my mom is an actress in the Chicago Theater and this is the party to ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Thanks Kyllorac, I missed that update. Great idea, really. A big inconvenience to people who abuse it, and only a small inconvenience to people who genuinely use the feature for ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Quote Button Removed for Literary Works
Cool. Sorry I reported this as a site bug, I missed this update. I understand why this has been implemented, but as everyone has said before me, people who do ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Time of Incident (include your timezone): UTC/GMT +10 hours (Eastern Standard Time EST) - Australia, QLD Browser: Mozilla Firefox Page You Were On: Random pages, sometimes it happens, sometimes it ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: What is the correct response to stop?
- right there, thank you very much :3 Wow, Spice Girls.
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Universe of Dreams
Hey :) I'm Jai and I'll be reviewing this today. A story of truth, and though it might be disappointing to some, it is what it is, and I can't ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: My jealous zombie ex-girlfriend - chapter two
Hi Retro, I'm Jai. A few things before I begin: 1) It's really easy to make your story immediately desirable. Add spaces between the new line breaks. Scroll down below ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: just Sarah:Chapter 2
Hi Blue :) Well, this has been up for a loooong time with no review, so here I am. Hopefully to help you out :) Now, the only reason why ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Frankenstein Children
Man I'm totally still learning my way around. I guess that quoting's as good as I can get for this. Well, happy belated welcome to YWS :) I hope you're ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: --
There are truly no words. I had fully intended to write a good long review for you, detailing errors, offering suggestions, criticising every other line. But no. This story is ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Honey I Love You
Hi :) I don't normally review lyrics, but I see that this has been available for review for some time now, and no one has taken up the challenge, so ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Frankenstein Children
Hi Thomas, I'm Jai. Firstly I'd like to say that I actually read over your story first before my review. I seldom ever do this. I guess I just find ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Nature's Elements - Chapter Two
Hey Star, I'm Jai and I'm going to review this for today. I haven't read the previous chapter, just so you know. First off, you might like to hide your ...
Jan 5, 2011
