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Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
:P I thought the opposite to Skins, in a way. Instead of finding the playful bantering realistic, I found it childish and a bit silly. "It's nothing," she said. "No ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hi Skins. Would just like to say you're fantastic and the efforts you go to do keep up to date with your WRFF thread is astounding and an example of ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
No problem :) I've just about finished reviewing Stop and Stare for Skins, so as soon as I've reviewed the last chapter and summed up all my points, I'll start ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)
The first chapter pales in comparison to this. The only thing I can think of is deleting the first chapter and rewrite it from scratch. You've matured so much as ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Awesome. Two things though: 1) What are the chances that she would run into her brother of all people at this random area? He wasn't heading home, was he? It's ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 3)
Definitely like Zoey's side of the story way more than Charlie's. It's almost as if you've spent more time with Zoey's part, giving her more character and far more description ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
Everyone has said everything else but this: What about the other boys? Wouldn't they have gone to the police? Seems silly that the girl's "boyfriend" hasn't told the police what ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Finally here to review, Skins, haha. I'm so lazy. On to the review. It rained that night. I was strumming my guitar, playing whatever crap came into my head as ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5
!!! You. Are. Fantastic. It's not every day that I log into YWS and find that a writer has genuinely followed my advice and completely overhauled (almost) their story based ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Paper Hearts and Bagels by Esther Sylvester Section One Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Section Two Under review. 0/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1
Heya Sylvester, thanks for the request :) Sorry I didn't get on to this sooner, but uni homework beckoned quite evilly. Sooo, here I am to review one behalf of ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
The Masquerader Chap. 5 by megsug Under review. 1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far. Nice chapter, Meg :)
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5
Hi :) Thanks for requesting a review from the Dynamic Duo! Sorry I didn't do this as soon as I received notification, but I had university classes all day today. ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Godmod Partay~! Discussion
Name: Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: Depressed and emo. She loves to slit her wrists and wallow in self pity. Appearance: Black hair with purple ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The Magician, a folk tale
I don't know what to say. It's not often that I'm left speechless. *shakes head* This is the most useless review I've ever written, I imagine. I really enjoyed this ...
Jan 19, 2011
