sdshaw08

Oh, it was about popcycles!

That is because it is a Cinquain poem. Duh! It makes since to me!

Cycles Rainbow, fruity, Cooling, calming, freezing, Bringing memories flooding here, Summer

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I liked the part that you talked about dreaming about making a change yet, never getting around to doing so. I have a saying. ...

Let me just say something to you. Everyone needs to vent sometime, would you rather her vent by cutting or writing poetry about how she feels? I would go with ...

I can totally relate to the way the young boy felt in this poem. I was abused by my mother until I finally was able to get away. It is ...

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how you used the symbolism for the salt. Everyone knows that salt dries up snails and burns when it is poured ...

You rise up everyday. Sometimes you are covered by a dark, dreary cloud, others, you just shine. At night, when I am alone with the moon, darkness and pain are ...

[pre]No privacy! No freedom! You can't change anything! Constantly watched! You can start way to much drama during lunch! People search through your writing, pictures, and friends! Chance of being ...

[pre]Sometimes I sit and wonder how my life could be so depressing then you came along... I have no reason to be upset, you make me smile with all you ...

I liked everything about this poem. I could tell it came from your heart and that is the best way to write anything.

Um... I'll go easy on you cause you're new. Well...? So short and pointless, no offence. There is a lot of potential and you are not using it. Just keep ...

[pre]You disgust me. You're filthy. Covered with my blood. Scratching me against your blades. Slowly degrading me. My skin is raw and fiery. I hate what you do to me. ...

Personally, I find this poem to be one of the best haikus I have read in a while.