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Haha I love your use of the Fratellis :P. Really drew me into it, but I couldn't remember where Stevie came into it (Chelsea Dagger, Vince The Loveable Stoner); however, ...

Ok, some brilliant crime books are: - 'Along Came A Spider'- James Patterson - 'Want To Play?'- PJ Tracy - 'Severed'- Simon Kernick - 'Kiss The Girls'- James Patterson ~Sday

At last, I read it! :P One word: wow. To be honest, that was the only word which I could use to sum it up. I don't tend to remain ...

I don't know what possessed you to make such a story, but it was executed pretty damn well ;P. It reminded me a little of Holden in 'Catcher In The ...

Alright xbrokenxstar, I love how personal the poem feels when you read it, and it obviously means an awful lot to you (especially in adolescent years of identity and whatnot). ...

Alright Demeter, Loved it, its flow and rhythm is perfectly layered, and it reveals enough without being patronising to the reader. My favourite part was : 'Tell me about the ...

A little story about global warming An old Bing Crosby record warbles in the heavy air, the sweaty Christmassy lyrics hanging and oozing like treacle hanging off of a spoon. ...

Aaaaaiiiiiitteeee Yarmin, I'm Sday, pleasure's all mine :P I've been a member for all of 4 (?) days, and already I feel semi-integrated into the website, checking posts every 10 ...

After reading 'A Woman Of No Importance', I hate the word 'very'. Although, 'logorrhoea' is the best word to ever exist in language :P

A friend told me about this website, and whilst I originally joined with the intention of getting my stuff out there, I now see that building up relationships with fellow ...

Thanks for the comments, I think I'm gonna take the 'white as black' out- it IS ambiguous. Also, I'm unsure of whether to develop it and make it into a ...

I loved the poem. Feminist, yet optimistic as well. Reminds me a little of Carol Ann Duffy in 'The World's Wife', and thats not a bad thing. I loved the ...

The darkness of living Boy, I’m dark. Black as night, light trapped by the clouds. I’m in a cave. No, not a metaphorical cave, like the shit-arsed psychologists wanted me ...

I love reading short poems, that whilst are straight to the point use imagery and ideas. That's whats happening here. I love the personification of the trees and their awakening ...

I sounds a little like Martin Luther King's 'I have a dream' speech, but not in a bad way. A more, developed, structured way. I like the line breaks and ...