scribblingquill

This is exactly my views on life myself. The point of life is, to live. Its so blindingly obvious.

The machine image is very cool, I'd love to see you expand on it. This has potential, but is rather brief and so far, shallow. Remember a poem is an ...

I think I am a little in love with you

we do?!

This is a really lovely poem Imagery is great, and the theme is very interesting this is the kind you can curl up in

wow you're 13? potential potential potential I think this has capacity to be something really interesting, but if you don't like it, don't write it. Working on things you don't ...

mayo.

hahaha ha ha omg haha ...wow this comment makes me sound so intelligent. still. this is awesome.

New year was NOT what I expected it to be >_> I got rather drunk at Stu’s and was having a pretty good time until I saw it was eleven ...

Haha pre-teenage girl review. I like your writing. Its nice and...poetic in a REAL way you know? Reminds me of nick hornby quite a lot. You ever read high fidelity? ...

[ at a friends birthday "party", basically just the gang hanging out by the basketball hoop] I was sitting against the lamppost and Xander sits down next to me. We ...

i think "stuck up fags" is a bit harsh to be honest. theres no need for people to start name calling.

wow awesomeness the voice is so clear, its brilliant

:D thank you for all the points! I typed this really quick, but i didn't notice there were QUITE so many typos and mistakes. yeah it comes out a lot ...

you should try and base things on real feelings. your poem will never be as good as someones who truly feels like this about a person, so try and write ...