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Re: Milk
“You can’t have those skittles, Was that rainbow free range? Did it live a full life?” But what about the bliss of a hot red and yellow on dusty base? ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Is It Wrong?
generally I type my poems straight away. If i have the window open then I can spend hours flitting in and out of it adding things in or taking away. ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: What's your Favorite Poem(s)?
Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:04 am Post subject: I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off. ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Name Me Some Poets!
Carol Ann Duffy's who I've been studying for advanced english. Though I'm not a great fan of "Warming Her Pearls" my two favourite poems of hers are Valentine and Selling ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
I think actually the biggest difference is that emo poems are all abstract. Real poetry has to use objects, situations or characters to convey things. Poetry that tells about feelings ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: There's This Girl
The way you make it feel like a first person camera almost is amazing. Its all been said up there ^ but I love this!
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Distaster 4
haha this is really good! its really funny, i love how its all very young sounding, and her trying to be Mature. Its hilarious. The rabid animals and the gummy ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: For the Unseen - One
This was really interesting, and I think the story concept is really cool. However, probably because you're trying to get all the details figured out for yourself it seems a ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Think
I like the gist of the story. I'd decided id read the first paragraph and if it didn't capture my attention i wouldnt continue. it did, and im glad. I ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Death's Visit
Wow! that was brilliant. Seriously impressed. So short, but you get such a great feel of the characters. Funny as hell too. Man. Wish i could write like you. thats ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Oxytocin
I have stolen the corners of your lips, where they turn up, And hidden them in the base of my brain. You haven’t noticed yet, I’ve taken your flurrying fingertips ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Ruby Cliffs
this is lovely and sad, the setting is beautiful, and it doesn't remind me of anything else I've read. There are only a couple of small things i would change: ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: He's not quite ready
hhmm there's nothing wrong with it technically, but it didn't really seem to have...a point? it felt a little like you were writing it for the sake of writing something. ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: There's An Art To It
Is it shallow, you think, to think that your words are never enough? It’s never enough if you are not bending space beside me I find that I am too ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Mr. Darcy or Mr. Cullen?
D: colin firth... ...ew? i liked the other one better. but yes books wise darcy. YES darcy is amazingly rich and good looking and generous, but its balanced by him ...
Feb 1, 2009
