scribblingquill

Thank you! I will go through and change a couple of details when I get round to it ^_^ And actually I went for the supporing band, cause they are ...

Haha thank you! I agree about all the and stuff. This was writted a long time ago, and I kinda tune out after having read something a million times. Thanks ...

O.o I think I really liked this. Though I don't understand it. Also I got confused cause it seems to be about monsters or vampires or something and then with ...

Just a little bit of prose inspred by Mazzy Star. She's a legend. The rain pours down. Wet. Splashy. Noisy. But I don’t notice. I don’t notice the cold, the ...

I like the cerebral lands... ..and the ending is cute. well...not cute...whatever. you get my point.

I'm jealous of your title because it would be perfect for a piece of mine...damn you.... ...but yes. Its great writing. So I guess I can't stay mad. :D

I LOVE the second sentence. Its fantastic. Totally true (I am indeed sixteen, although not adopted...that I know of). I think the ending is the weakest part. The description in ...

I'm pretty sure there is a stark bird. but isn't the end meant to be "spark"? i like the ending but i think spark would make it more meaningful than ...

EDIT: This is very old and embarassing now. I wrote it when I was like fourteen...D: ew. lol. This was one of those weird life imitating art things, cause months ...

Okay. I originally did this for a contest in which you had to write a short story called "Oor Wey O Spikin" and its theme was scottish dialect. I wrote ...

You are the house aren't you? Its discovering yourself? has anyone read that part In the Amber splyglass where lyra is described as a house, lights coming on and dorrs ...

I agree if you want it to be a good piece of literature then you have to do what those people up at the top encourage. But I can tell ...

I really really like this. All the imagery is so soft and delicate, the lace cradle, the feeling of a whole life being ahead. Its great. And the repetition of ...

The last line is epic ^_^

This is really cool, I agree the imagery is great. But I agree there's something jarring about "Heat not slackens". But yeah. go you.