scribblingquill

I think that the dialogue with “You put cream in my tea” he tells me is a little clumsy- you could try changing it to something like "Cream? in my ...

Wow, I like this! I think this is the weakest stanza: My heart is heavy, With the burden of regret, Regret for the things I've done, That you will never ...

this is very intriguing, and pretty well written, but what is it?! Is it the intro to a story, or is this meant to be it? The only thing I ...

Ok, am rly confused with this. I know it's probably because I can't understand :~ But I LOVED the imagery in this poem, at the start you said "Inside this ...

Love is like raindrops you see. Specks of what keeps me going through a wasteland, like skimming two parts together (me) till they click (the world) And you are the ...

I love this. think the reviewer above me said everything really, though I don't really understand the ending that is likely laziness on my part. I love the imagery at ...

this is gorgeous. i love "Fun won’t hack it anymore. You’ll let me down so gently, so, so kindly it’ll crack me in two." Beautiful. I think the last paragraph ...

flickers of familiarity

Push through dry soil with a curving blade, The Red Turkey would work, traders said. After the rain, dropped dust to hold it in My brow, hotter with the growing ...

I like the idea of this, and it is quite touching, but i find it to be pretty simple. The only technique i can pick out is repetition, and I'd ...

Inside this wood I keep pocket universes, in tins, collected Dried, infused, divided, labeled. Poetry. First a category sings, Green, Black, White, Oolong, And becomes a voyager’s lullaby: Sisters S

Haha wow I really was being obscure! Actually its about veganism... the "where's my baby?" stanza is from the point of view of a mother cow, and yes there are ...

I'm gonna take a wild stab in the dark here and say you have/are studying philsophy? Don't leave the metaphysics out! Its irrelevant but fun ^_^

I thought smashing something into her face was the best solution. I was sick of resolutions and compromises and being a good listener, or pretending to be. I’d do it ...

You’ve never killed anyone before. It’s not something you’ve ever seriously considered. So you’ve never really thought about the kind of thing that stops one human being killing another. Shoul