scribblingquill

hey don't be annoyed about critiques on here. really no one means it in a bad way, even the most amazing poems people aren't afraid to say things they didn't ...

hmm I'm not sure what this is, and i guess its not really my usual thing, however i do like the whole child-hierarchy thing you got going on. And your ...

yeah i was kinda like "matt bellamy goes on here??!!??!!" lol, but now all is clear ^_^ Muse= favourite band evers. :D and try being called rachael...¬_¬ I hear my ...

thank you =3 just a question though, what do you think orange fairies are? I wonder if anyone gets it right... and yes I'm the narrator, this is sort of...autobiographical? ...

how come there are no comments?! I fucking love this. its so... "“My work is done here,” I said to myself. I’m good at my job." "I’m drunk right now. ...

haha nice end, i like it (y)

some of the lines are pretty cool, but I'd say if you're new to poetry don't box yourself in with strict rhym schemes. Sometimes it seems like you're only saying ...

"Now here," i said Like this My breath didn't echo in the dark, not lonely We were cold, but full and real and tangible And happy. You don't always make ...

I love this. i think the start is better than the end, I love the booms, the colours and the bit about "my heart jumping to get to you". Thats ...

:L I like it a lot, but i don't think it really suits the form of a poem.

it sounds cool so far, but i can't tell of course until i hear it. I'd be really intrigued to hear this song actually. everyone should check out a song ...

Changing My house, my family, shrunk to pinheads Voices muted, crackes through plastic holes Thunder reduced to whispers. How I had grown. I tried to shrink back, Remembering being tiny, ...

I definitely like the end two stanzas, they sealed it for me after i was unsure at the beginning. can I ask, is the last line a quote? or did ...

this is really cool the image is great. I know we're not meant to know whats on the paper, and thats part of the mystery and all that, but I ...

hey I just started and then scanned through after I noticed you use the MC's name way too much. Its Joseph did this, then Joseph did that... and its just ...