scribblingquill

Running, keep on running, keep stumbling over dandelions and burn burn burn yourself out, we’ll will be brighter than our parents, blazing through the sky. We’ll be prettier than cracked ...

Art night out, soup, surprisingly good. Liquid refuse because I hesitate with my date of birth, I want to tell them “Its not because I don’t know it, it’s because ...

I miss you at night, when skin prickles, and lonely chords roll out and through my ears. I miss you when my tea begins to lose its vibrancy, and cool, ...

I am actually writing a grocery list, but grocery lists are so fun! There's a kind of poetry to them... Tofu, tiger bread, soy, miso, sweet peppers, shitake mushrooms....yum. Apart ...

You are honest, which is awesome, I find myself beating around the bush a lot on here. This was fantastic. Nothing really I can criticize, I'm sure you've thought about ...

Despite not watching this show, or knowing any of the characters well, a guilty part of me enjoyed this a lot...

You were too lazy to make up characters? deary me! couple of things... you really mention people's hair too much in this. And the colour of their eyes. Its much ...

Thanks for the crit Jon =3 I'll reply to a couple of things here... -didn't notice about the misspelling there, will change it ^_^ - Though I understand your point ...

This desk is the Parthenon. My fingers pick at splinters and varnish, in a lineup I am another one shuffled forward, past, to leave my mark And move on. Archeologically ...

haven't posted on of these in a while, this is my actual diary. Following us as we travelled down for my art school interview and the troubles that ensued. Please ...

Oh this is cool! venom-tanks... that is the most powerful imagery! Love it. the starlight stuff is really evocative too, i like it. i agree with Snoink though, I don't ...

this is lovely... Writing and history- markings have been preoccupying me lately, this reminds me a little of my newest poem, except less self-indulgent! oh well. xD my favourite line ...

disturbing, yet lovely, everything i look for in a poem ^_^

This is cool! Couple of nitpicky things then ill say more interesting stuff.. If he were english he would say "streets" not "blocks". As soon as he said that I ...

Wow! So much great imagery here, really your word choice is great, the image of the girl in the sunflower fields was lovely- could really picture her. Dialogue was real ...