screamandshout

You misspelled father and insted wrote farther. No big deal i do that stuff all the time. you also need to indent on the new paragrahphs. And you start a ...

Not something i would normally read but its good. The main thing that bothered me is the 19th line. and the fall ain’t enough to kill me, but the word ...

This is good. I write a lot of poems but I couldn't ryhme evey other line and have it actully make sence. the only thing about it is in the ...

Ok whenever i pot a new peice it alwayse says "remember if you don't review you wont get reveiws" or something of that nature. well how does that work? Do ...

My room is right over the back porch, which has an open roof. I pull back the curtains and James is sitting on the awning. I open the window having ...

“I-I-I was just heading home,” I managed to stutter as I jump to my feet. He shook his head. “You shouldn’t be out in the dark by yourself let me ...

I decide it’s a better idea just to wait till the bell rings than to go to class late. I go back to the bathroom and listen to my Ipod. ...

Looking down on all that I’ve ever known made me realize a lot of things. For one you never really know someone unless you are them. Well I guess you’d ...

wow! this was absulutly amazing

this is nice

i love it

honestly i cant figure out where he's getting all this stuff and becky if awfully whiny

I really like this poem. Its good but then agian it could just be that i can relate.

this is extremally good. from what i can see from this you should really keep writing. plz read my story, Wounded, and review. You wont be dissipointed.

I like it keep writing.