screamandshout

With my hands tucked in the pocket of my hoodie I walked the block to my house, trying to figure out whether or not I was dreaming. Mom isn’t home ...

I wrote this 2 years ago, and I just found it. Just one wish, is all I want. Just a chance, to be all I'm not. The wish to live ...

I sat up with a jolt. Thunder booms in the distance and flashes of light poured through the window. I glance over at my alarm clock, four twenty-three. I lay ...

Don’t remind me that I love him. Let’s keep that between you and me. But if you ever see him, Ask him, does he see? We had a great thing ...

“Need some help?” I offer. “That worthless piece ’o crap excuse of a dad of yours! Who the hell does he think he is telling us he’s coming with basically ...

For a two minute poem this is great. I'm not gonna give a thero reveiw but I did notice in stanza four you forgot to capitilize "all"

Don’t remind me that I love him. Let’s keep that between you and me. But if you ever see him, Ask him, does he see? We had a great thing ...

After James left I had to find a way back up to the window, my stupid sister locked the door. It took twenty minutes, some trashcans, and a few bruises ...

I'm finally alone at last. It's taken me all day, to get to the spot where I belong, the place I long to stay. The water ripples perfectly. The turtle ...

this poem is nice but not overly amazing. It was a little hard to follow with all the words running together. I think you should consider putting it in stanzas.

i love this i was just going to skim it at first and i read all of it.

I'm finally alone at last. It's taken me all day, to get to the spot where I belong, the place I long to stay. The water ripples perfectly. The turtle ...

Wow this picture is perfect. You were right about the lips being a bit off but other than that this is perfect.

I wrote this while i sat at my favirote place, the foot of an oak tree beside the pond. I havent really edited it much but I like it anyways. ...

I wrote this while i sat at my favirote place, the foot of an oak tree beside the pond. I havent really edited it much but i like it anyways. ...