screamandshout

This was really sad, but in a good way. I liked the ending since I really diddn't see it coming. As it was said earlier, there were a couple of ...

I really like this and don't have any complaints. No spelling errors that I caught, and punctuation looks right. I really agree with ziggiefred, the "Howl" part kinda threw me ...

It's a poem I wrote the other day and I'd appreceate it if you'd take a look at it.

It's a personal poem i wrote the other day and I'd like dome input. Please and thank you :D

It's a poem but I'd really appreciate it if you'd check it out

It's dramatic poetry so please check it out.

It's a poem, so take a look.

please and thank you

please reveiw this for me. :D

First off welcome to YWS, and thanks for your imput on my poem. As other people said, a lot of spelling mistakes. If you wanted to help this a lot, ...

I see you Mommy. You sit alone on your bed. I see you cry. You regret so much. But why? Wasn’t I good Mommy? I tried to be. I love ...

This was something I needed to do. I felt like I should share it. I knew he’d gone before I awoke. So I just went back to sleep. I never ...

I don't care if it sounds like I want ppl to feel sorry for me, cause i don't. Poetry is about self expression, not trying to please ppl. Kill me ...

Sitting in the darkness I write this as I think That if I never met you Would in these tears I sink? If I never told you The words I ...

Dearest Haven, What more can I say to you, with this my dieing breath? You brought meaning to a hopeless soul. You saved my life from a prison of endless ...