screamandshout

Would you mind taking a look at this short story for me? Please and thank you.

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Hey would you mind reading one of my short stories? Please and thank you.

I was sitting on the floor of our living room, playing with my barbies. With Emily sitting on her lap, Momma was reading us a story, the one about the ...

dramatic poetry. Please and thank you.

I've always been limited, by words I cannot say. I've always been afraid for you, to think of me a certain way. I usually just listened, to what was on ...

I sit here in the corner, pen and pad in hand. As I wait to be inspired, my mind goes straight to you. You're not someone I know, and I ...

Walking down a darkened street, I find the place where two roads meet. To the left is bright and cheery. To the right, dark and dreary. Frozen in time, I ...

Ok I really love this poem, but there are a few things you should work on. The first thing I noticed is that you used the word "so" twice in ...

Hey would you take a look at this poem I wrote? Please and thank you.

Hey would you take a look at this poem? Please and thank you.

Could you take a look at this poem? Please and thank you.

Hey could you take a look at this poem for me? Please and thank you.

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