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Re: Wrote this when one of my best friends' dad died in the war
I think that it's really nice that you wrote this for your friend, and I love the poem. I agree with Ladypurple, the imagery was great. I hope to see ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Just a little bit meticulous...
I would really appreciate if you'd review my short story. Please and thank you.
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]
It's a general fiction short story that i would love to have reviewed. Please and thank you
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Divorces effects on children
Ok this is something that's been on my mind lately. I've been thinking about writing a short story about a 14 year old girl, whose parents are going through a ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: The last day
She sits in her seat, unable to refrain from gazing over at his empty desk. She can’t focus on the teacher’s lesson. She doesn’t hear the whispers, which suck all ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Daddy
Wow! This is definatly on of the best things I've read in a while. I thought you captured a small child's point of view perfectly, but for most of the ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: The Call Unanswerd
She hides her petty face, and covers up the pain. Her straightened curls disguise, The hurt she feels inside. She smiles to her friends, and laughs at all his jokes. ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Questions of a Shatterd Soul
Does it always cross their mind, when they make their own end? Does that person always seem the kind, who would take it into their hands? Is it the phrases ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: I'll Never Understand(edited)
I was sitting on the floor of our living room, playing with my Barbie dolls. Momma sat with Emily on her lap, reading us the story about the caterpillar that ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Crank!!!!! Ellen Hopkins =)
There is a new book, that I don't think is out yet, but is about her son, Hunter if I remember right. In some copies of Glass there is a ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Dearest Haven(edited)
Dearest Haven, What more can I say to you, with this my dieing breath? You brought meaning to a hopeless soul. You saved my life from a prison of endless ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Crank!!!!! Ellen Hopkins =)
You going to love this book more than life itself I guarantee. The second your done with it I know you'll want to go the store right then to pick ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: I'm only gonna break break your heart (accepting!)
Would you mind having a look at this short story for me? Please and thank you.
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Unspeakable
I've always been limited, by words I cannot say. I've always been afraid for you, to think of me a certain way. I usually just listened, to what was on ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Why Do We Hate Pit Bulls?
I really don't have anything to say review wise, but I completely agree with you. I really love Pit bulls and if my parents would let me, I would have ...
Jul 7, 2010
