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Would you review my poem for me? Please and thank you!

Would you review my poem? Please and thank you.

Aww, thier so cute. Great photos, the only I didn't love is the first one, just because sheep are already colorless enough, but either way, awesome job.

Haha I love it, definatly what I think every time the internet stops working.

I agree with TmB317 about the meaning. Overall I love the poem, the emotion of it drew me in, and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. ...

I loved this. It really flowed in the way Greek myths do, I almost forgot it wasn't actully part of Greek mythology. Keep up the good work.

Wow! This is one of the most powerfull things I've ever read. It's got so much emotion without being whiny. Great job.

Absolutly love it. *clicks like button*

Well obviously it's way to short for me to do a real reveiw, but either way, I like it. A couple commas would be nice, but they're not really needed ...

I hadn't written anything for the longest time out of discourgement, but I'm back and I hope to stay. I’ve been gone for awhile. I didn’t plan to come back. ...

I really like this, even though it's clearly a rough draft. But it's not overly sugarcoated, and straight to the point. I think you should put this into paragraphs because ...

Even though it didn't make total sense, it's definatly a good poem and a great idea.

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.