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Hi! I wrote about this in my critic to part 10 without realizing that maybe you wanted it here.... but essentially I don`t think that the fight in part 10 ...

Ok, I shall forewarn everyone that this will probably be rather long winded and I'll also probably ramble a lot... so brace yourselves, or of course you could just skip ...

She clung, even as he crumbled. Her knife craved bright crimson vengeance. (I posted 2... hope thats OK!) I relly like this type of thing, though it really is harder ...