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I really really liked this :D I have never been to spain (I am going next year though, with school!) and I feel like I know what to expect now ...

This was good, I really got to know the protagnist which is great. The background history that you give is really effective in explaining why the character is the way ...

Well hello! and welcome of course :D Ginevra... I love the name, do you plan to post the story hear any time soon, sounds interresting. So yeah, if you have ...

I too really liked this, the peotry was beautiful and yet it seemed effortless :wink: If you mean picked up on the musical terms that you slid in in several ...

Your style was really original and effective. I liked it a lot and am already pretty engaged with the fate of your characters. In the first paragraph there may be ...

I don't know if I would personally ever have an abortion, but I do think that it is very important to provide women with that option. I know that this ...

Very interresting, though I agree that it is a little short to be an entire chapter. You introduced the setting and some aspects of the protagonist but there really isn't ...

Wow! I had to go back and read the first few parts cause I hadn't read any so far and all of it is fantastic! I would go back and ...

One question that does come to mind when I ask myself whether or not I believe we exist is who is to say what "existence" is? In a sense if ...

Hello! Firstly, the change in POV was a little unsettling but it does add originality. It was a little weird though the way that we are given so much more ...

Me again! I am becoming rather repetitive, but again, I liked this a lot. Ok so I'll jump straight into my critique :D "Everything started out nice enough." This is ...

This was really original. I liked it...a lot :D I loved how you created a format where you showed the contrast of the two situation without making it seem like ...

This was really interesting... definitly original, I really liked it :D I don't have much to say about this so far as structure goes. Therefore I will instead pick at ...

I liked this a lot :D There were a few things that I noticed that, structurally, could be tightened... 1)While your description at the begining is fantastic it is a ...

To me there is no question that Global Warming is happening, that we are causing it, and that it is a very real problem. Has anyone seen the movie Al ...