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I am a little torn with this one. The subject matter is perhaps a little over done, but you did capture the stupidity of SOME teenage girls well... the problem ...

Hi, thanks for the PM :D I loved it! The characters are really starting to become people in my eyes, usually it takes me a lot of time, or several ...

It was alright, nothing fantastic. I have seen it about a thousand times because a friends sister was an extra in it, needless most of the time we ignored the ...

I loved this, absolutely loved it! The way that you concluded with the question of whether or not she will ever see Michael again was fantastic, it would have been ...

This was really good. I am so intrigued as to your characters(and I am dying to find out who/what they are exactly) and your developement of the protagonist was very ...

Very Good! I don't have much to critic on a wide scale here, because I can't find anything wrong with the story, so I will just point out a few ...

"Why did I forgive you? She’s coming back, I know it. Someday she’ll be back, and she’s going to want you. That I can promise. Maybe you’ve learned, who knows? ...

This is fantastic, definitly not plain or obvious However the word "perfect" is a little over used, the repetitiveness is really effective... its just that there are a couple of ...

I loved this, the style was almost that of poetry, it was really neat to read :D I hope she leaves him! I was bursting by the end, I want ...

Thanks for the critic JCobsesed :D I'll look into making the sister more realistic, she does need some good qualities... About the painting, to tell you the truth I don't ...

I am addicted! I really like M., and the way you presented him to us. In some ways I want her to repair her relationship with Tom, in other ways ...

The remainder of her escape proceeded unhindered. Upon arrival at the site the tension of fury was released from her neck and she was able to let go of the ...

I really liked this, a lot. With school shootings becoming more and more common, and more horrific all the time it is a tough subject to write about, it hits ...

First off... Thank you so much for the critics!!!! I really appreciate it Sam! ( of course you may call me anything you like :wink: ) ok, so to clear ...

She gnawed her lip restlessly, energy surged, a turmoil of emotions struggled for room on the limited canvas space. Feeling as though without an outlet her very being would overflow ...