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such a cliff hanger ending! OMG, I don't want to have to wait for the next part. the pace seemed a little rushed, but the content was amazing. I really ...

Sooo good! Again I have no real advice for making it better, so I'll just rant about what I liked. Firstly I love the way you introduced this chapter, the ...

I particularly enjoyed this one. Maybe its because I've been away too long but this was definitly one of my favorites. I love that she's doubting things, even when they ...

Fabulouse as per your usual. I am really liking her mom, she's so mom-ish. I eagerly await the next part. -Gen

AHHHHH! I have been so late in getting around to this, please don't take this to mean I am still not desperate for more Lyla.... life has just been too ...

Hi! I wrote about this in my critic to part 10 without realizing that maybe you wanted it here.... but essentially I don`t think that the fight in part 10 ...

Utterly fantastic! Very dramatic indeed. I am really really looking forwar to the next installement. I really have nothing to suggest, I see how Laura's abrupt exit could be interpreted ...

Love it, love it, love it! Sorry about it taking me awhile to get to critiquing it...I had some limited access to the internet the last few months (yes, it ...

This was agin very very good :wink: (by the way, sorry it took me a while to get back to you on this... limited internet access this summer!) I agree ...

I usually go with paperback, there are several reasons for this; mainly the cost doesn’t hurt my wallet quite so much, and they can be brought almost anywhere without too ...

Fantastic! I am always so happy when I find you've posted more :D I agree that the fight could have been drawn out a little bit, but more than that ...

This really isn't as bad as you seem to think that it is, don't be so hard on yourself :wink: "I shut my eyes out the block out the glare, ...

Yeah! another part, and she and Tom are finally getting along too! :D I am so addicted to this story. School really does get in the way doesn't it? I ...

I liked this, it certainly was short and sweet :wink: "I think these witnesses were dimwits. I think they were willing to say anything to collect part of the reward, ...

This is really good... really different from much of the stuff I have read on the site in the last little while :D "He gripped her jaw in one hand ...