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This was a little ominous. If that's the feel you were going for, good job. So, it worked well enough. There was an interesting dichotomy between the two killers. I'm ...

Hey, that was good. I figured- with my remarkable perception skills- that you were religious in some nature. I guess a PK fits that pretty well I agree with Aet: ...

Wow, that was really good. Even though I tend to be a bit of a pugilist, I have to agree: War is awful, even for good causes- for the freeing ...

Yes, religion is one of the most controversial topics around. It can grab anyone off the street and make them pay attention, but you didn't quite do Satanism the justice ...

Hey, yeah, this was okay. I really felt for Anne, don't we all? It was paced about right and the grammar and punctuation were pretty good for the most part. ...

Amazing! I loved it! This new development is really exciting; really great job coming up with it all. I think it was much more interesting at this length. The short ...

I love Palahniuk books, just thought I'd say that. This was an interesting letter. It seems that you had the same reaction to Invisible Monsters that I did to David ...

Hey, this was good. I liked it. Way to go on more "showing" instead of "telling" this time. My curiosity was piqued with the character Maria. She's an interesting character. ...

Hey, this is interesting! Good job. I'm all puzzled over who the tipsy friend from chapter 7 is. The mystery is on! Fortunately, it won't be long to find out ...

This is definitely something worth extending. It did start a little slow, but it definitely picked up after several paragraphs. I also agree that it would make an excellent prologue. ...

Oboy! Another installment in the "about a revolution" series. As far as titles go, how about, "The Liberation of Cambria" or "Night is Falling" or "A Time of War" or ...

Hey, this is good. I can't ever recall assassin-driven sequences 13-year old girls , but this was good. It was kind of Tomb Raider/Aeon Flux/Blood Rayne-ish. Not bad, not bad ...

Oooh, scary. :smt107 It was pretty intriguing and totally unpredictable. When George found out the girl he was talking to was a ghost/phantom/paranormal presence, I was genuinely surprised. I'm left ...

This is excellent. I especially like the feel it gives as to how the citizens of Cambia are handling the conflict. It was well-written and flowed well, as have the ...

Yeah, this is pretty great. It's so real, it's Stephen King-ish. I agree that is sounds like someone would say while talking to the police after they were brought in ...