- Re: Son of the Dragon chapter 1 Jan 29, 2012
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Re: Hellfire chapter 3
ok i messed up. I'm not a girl ok :P I dont know how you think. but thanks anyway. I'll just have to come up with something better.
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Hellfire chapter 2
He probably is. I just picked the one i liked that was already on the site. Sounds good. Thanks for the review.
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: Hellfire chapter 2
Thanks. i thought "Stranger" was caped. I have a habit of making mistakes like that. and he he's digging his fingers straight into the wall itself. thanks. send me a ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: Utopia chapter 2
thanks. yeah i forget to do that with my diologe.it's a habit.
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Son of the Dragon chapter 1
Hey guys. This is a new thing. I hope everyone enjoys it.
Jan 19, 2012 -
Re: Utopia chapter 2
this is the second chapter of my "Utopia". I'm so sorry it's taken so long for this. too busy. hope everyone enjoys it.
Dec 28, 2011 -
Re: Hellfire
Yeah there is tech. There should be a section where it talks about the Hawks and Wolves. They're machines that guard the lands between the villages. The Hawks are like ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Hellfire
I understand your questions. The reason for the farming is because it's the only city left in North America. There are other villages but their also part of New York. ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Hellfire
Thanks. Dang. Did not expect that at first
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Hellfire
This is my newest project. I hope everyone enjoys it. Btw. For those of you waiting for my Utopia project. Im so sorry its taking so long. Been very busy. ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Secrets Drowned in Blood Chapter 1 Pt.1
This isn't really my taste for a story but it's good. The only mistake I found was when he corrects her. he says "the universe love me better." just change ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Shade- The First Immortal - chapter one
i like this alot. but its a lil short. a few lil mistakes but that happens. i want to read more
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Fear ME; my Dear!
this is rly good. but u gota watch what u say cause it has a SAW feel to it. just watch cause some people might take it like ur copying. ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Death comes in numbers
this is finally the whole chapter. took a while but i finally got it. im sure theres a lot of mistakes but the more feed back the better off i ...
Aug 16, 2011
