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This is very cool. Kinda like Eragon and The Vampire's Assistant. There were only two things I found wrong with this. You should discribe her in the begining. Does she ...

Alright. Well I'm not a big witch fan but I like this a lot. My only problem is at the begining. I didn't know who was talking, where they were, ...

not a big fan of this type of thing. Not the gay thing. Its just too real for me. But it was a good piece. All I could find was ...

sorry guys. im still workin on his piece. come back later and it should be up. sorry

This is good. It reminded me of insidious. The one thing I found was at the begining. Give a bit more detail about where he was. Did they have a ...

You are definately descriptive in this. I like this a lot. the only thing i found was at the end. It said about a black wolf with blue eyes then ...

This is very good. I love it. the only thing I found was that u don't rly get to know what she looks like. All I found was she has ...

i like this alot. but its a lil short. a few lil mistakes but that happens. i want to read more

this is rly good. but u gota watch what u say cause it has a SAW feel to it. just watch cause some people might take it like ur copying. ...

this is finally the whole chapter. took a while but i finally got it. im sure theres a lot of mistakes but the more feed back the better off i ...

yeah the first sentence thing was a typo. it's supposed to say "Jacob Rutherford, a police officer" but thanks for the other info. need as much as i can get

yeah im sorry it was so short. i hit submit when i ment to hit save but whatcha gonna do. but im glad u liked what i put up :)

Chapter 1 "The plague of madness" In the colony police station, Jacob Rutherford, a police officer working on several murder cases, is sitting at his desk looking at some pictures ...