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thanks, i fixed the grammar miskates. you know, I knew that I'm mistaken, but I wrote it like that because it just fit it quite good rhithemly. But I guess ...

Fire in the eyes Blood of our hands Once our gun is raised, it's a call for war Soldiers of eternity (This is what we are) Fighting for the war ...

I like your song! It is lively and flowing, has a clear and easy to follow rhytme. Morever, it's not as short as many other song (yeah, sometimes I see ...

So much meaning in such a short poem. There is some few topics whose better not to broaden about it. Good job!

I like the way you blured the pictures, that's operates the imagination. Very creative.

This poem is kind of repeating it self: You went away from your path, and then you came back. But you never really came back to your old place- the ...

Wow, amazing. This whole song is rythemed well, and every word falls just in the right place and order! But, one thing you have to take care for: make some ...

Are you having self- destruction inclination? This is one fearsome poem.... Oh, I'm joking, this is lovely. Exactly the same things I feel sometimes. I think you can add some ...

Every day I see her Walkin' Across the road And I think That she is so pretty I just want to say hello And then, she's gone Wherever I go ...

This is a good song, it seems to express your feeling toward someone you loved before, but then he hurt you. This is a common feeling that you've express with ...

Very well written poem, very deep. Only someone who've gone through this feelings can write like that. I love you poem, I'm sure it's about true feelings, and this is ...

Nice work. This is the second chapter I read from this novel, and I think it's great. You've increased the tense just by remainding new names. I can't wait to ...

Hi! This is quite an interesting story. I like the way new things are revealing to the reader- just in the right order and rate! However, there is somethings I'd ...

Oh, the absurd of darkness- it meant to hide the fearsome things, but in fact it terrifying us even more. Good job pointing it out. I liked the way you ...

thanks, I'm glad you understand the message. In any case, this is not a poem or a story or something like that, it's a philosophical outlook on life, so it ...