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I really like this. I have tried to find something to constructively criticize and really, I can't. I like the idea of two similar things joining, like dancing angels. When ...

wow. I like this poem a lot. You can really feel the emotions of the girl involved, and I think it fits your project well. It also highlights the point ...

Honestly, I say this piece needs a lot more detail. It's a good description of an event, but I also haven'[t the foggiest what just happened and also do not ...

Whoa. I actually really liked this. Although the details were sparing (what exactly happened to her and why? Was she attacked? assaulted? It's almost impossible to tell.) it hooks the ...