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Hey kris! Here's my crit key: Red= My comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Let's do this thing! Prologue It was m orning in the ...

Ashley! : Thanks so much for your crit!!! I owe you BIG time! I'll definitley be editing everything down as soon as I can!!! I'm glad you like it. Definitley ...

Xena: I appreciated your...insightful comments Kris: Thanks so much!!!! I really appreciated it. I know it is a bit fast paced (but I only have 4000 words to work with. ...

Wow! That was great! Intense ending lines! Really sticks with you after you read them. I didn't have time for a whole line edits review so I'll just stick to ...

Please Please Please??? I'll love you forever!!! There's also a part two I'll be posting soon so I would appreciate it if you could read that too! Thanks!!!

Hey Ashley! Sorry this review took so long! I've been out of the country for a while so I haven't had much access to a computer. I couldn't do line ...

Being Edited

Thanks so much everyone for responding! Here's a couple quick questions: When you say someone is cute or hot, is there another word people use for it in London? Also, ...

Hey Greenjay! I'm scasha! here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted Footsteps echoed throughout the quiet halls, reverberating through open chambers and vast hollows. Nothing ...

Hey Salsashanno! I'm scasha! Here's my crit key:Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better. Reviews are greatly appreciated. What do you think, too long? ...

Hey Sorsha! Your post looked lonley, so I decided to crit it! I apologize, since I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll do my best to review this. My ...

Part One “Sorry, I didn’t quite catch that,” Grace’s voice carried through the reception area. She didn’t mean to be that loud and her cheeks turned pink as the room ...

Hey everyone! so I decided to write a story set in London, England, and I need a bit of help with regular slang people use there. Do any of you ...

Hey LetsPaintTheTown! Welcome to YWS! I'm scasha! My review key is as follows: red = comments bold = words I've inserted that I think work better. Let's do this thing! ...

Hey Careless! Let's see what you got!! Morning, Penny decides, is no time to concentrate on walking attractively. Anyone who might raise an eyebrow over an eight o’clock waddle clearly ...