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Hey Love! I wanted to read the rest of your poetry! I'm excited! Here we go! Walking into the kitchen, where my mother's at. I try my best not to ...

Hey Sunshine! Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Blue = If I don't feel like using red Let's do ...

Hey! Here's my crit key: Red = comments Bold = words I've inserted Blue = If I don't feel like using red :-) A/N: Extended metaphor for the win. Came ...

Hey everyone! This is for clograbby's contest Lost in the Atmosphere. The picture I based the setting of my story on is attached. The rules are that you must have ...

Hey can you take a look at Murder She Drew ? Genre = Mystery (I put it in the Action/Adventure forum) Word Count = 4,000 words Type: Line Edits Thanks!

Hey Trident! I just put up a mystery called Murder She Drew and I was wondering if you could take a look at it. Things to look out for: 1) ...

Yeah I agree with the above poster. The characters in that book were flat. I got about 20 pages in and put it back on the shelf. It was a ...

Probably. I should go check to see what I can find about the author. Still, it was not worth reading.

I second the Far from the Madding Crowd one and the Prophecy of the Stones Also (I ran around my house trying to find the worst books I have ever ...

Hey again fourthelement! Here's my crit. I hope it helps. Author's Note: Okay, here's the deal. Last year, I wrote a light sci-fi novel about six teenagers who were transformed ...

Hey everyone! This is a story for Chocoholic's murder contest. For the contest, she asked us to create three different parts: the before the murder, during the investigation, and after ...

Hey Again! I didn't know you wrote poetry!!!!! My crit is below. I hope it helps. I nvisible forces that bind me to you, are - L ike selfish vines, ...

Hey! My crit key is as follows: Red = comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Blue = If I don't feel like using red Let's ...

Hey Rubric! Thought I should check this out. Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think could work better Blue = if I ...

Hey here's my crit! The Mutts pieces don't have to be read in order. They're written in random order out of a list of 100 one-word prompts in a challenge ...