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Hey Tusker! Welcome to YWS aka the best website to procrastinate with (I'm on here all the time)! I love this site and I hope you will too. I'm here ...

Hey mtempleton! Here's my review guide: red = comments bold = words I've inserted blue = comments that don't have to do with critiquing the story Let's do this thing ...

I thought of a couple of other books: Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe Lovely Bones by Alice Sebold Northanger Abbey by Jane Austen (my favorite austen book ever!)

Hey kaila! here's your second review! I hope it helps. Cal's Character contest. this is the link: #3 Word: 32: question Picture: 16 **** “Are you sure this is a ...

Just Listen by Sara Dessen. First romance novel that I read that I didn't cringe at. It actually felt realistic, and it was beautifully written. It wove music and prose ...

Yes! Except it's going awefully. I have 35,000 words so far and then another 7,000 words that are separate (I decided to write the ending to sort of help me ...

Hey sapphire! I'm here for critique number two. Let's see what you got! This is my entry for Stella's 'Fairytales Gone Wrong...' contest. It's a rewrite of Cinderella from a ...

Hey ashely! I see you have a new story :!: Let's see what you got Okay, this is a story I wanted to write because I have always been interested ...

This short story I wrote called My Sister's Heaven was influenced in the strangest of ways. I wanted to enter this short story contest and was having trouble coming up ...

Cal's Character Contest #5 Word: 49: trees Picture: 3 here's the link: **** The patter of the rain on the umbrella slowed, and finally disappeared. “How is it?” Jacob whispered ...

Hey always, can you crit My Missing Half?? Thanks!

Hey can you check out my short story: My Missing Half ? I'd appreciate any feedback you could give on it :-)

Hey Sapphire! review as requested/earned :-) Crit Key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted Blue = If I don't feel like using red (this color has nothing to ...

Hey I was wondering if you could critique my short story My Missing Half ? Thanks! p.s. I love you signature!!

Hey phantom! Here's my crit key: Red = comments Bold = Words I've inserted Blue = If I don't feel like using red let's do this thang!!! Hello everyone! I ...