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Hey!!! I decided that if I am going to check out your writing, I might as well start from the beginning. General stuff: Tellling vs. Showing! More showing please! Also, ...

Hey Thealyn! Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Blue = What I want to say but not in red ...

I'm reading Sense and Sensibility by Austen for my Jane Austen class (I'm nearly finished and then I'll be reading Emma ) For my creative writing class I'm reading Junot ...

I second the dan brown recommendation: Deception Point was my favorite book by him other than the da vinca code.

All right, to get back on topic, here's an article I found about Sarah Palin and her mayor duties in Wasilla, Alaska. Please check it out: (it's on msnbc and ...

Hey Angel of Death! I saw this floating around the forum, so I decided to critique it, let's see what you've got! Note: This is something entirely new and it ...

I have a ton of embaressing stories too. I have pretty bad vision since I'm nearsighted (can't see far away) and I didn't have my glasses on when I was ...

Thanks so much! *Goes to fix now*

Background: This is about the Buddhists Monks in South Vietnam who were being exploited and injured by the ruling catholics of the country during the Vietnam War. Enjoy! :D I ...

So experience wise (in years, Obama trumps Palin). Well, yes. But Obama is running for President, while Palin is running for Vice President. Therefore, the compariasons tha involve her and ...

Obama had eight years on the Illinois Senate and then he served for two years on the U.S. senate. Palin has only been governor of Alaska for less than two ...

I second Artemis Fowl series and The Hobbit! Great books!

Hey Kisonakl! Welcome to YWS! Here's my crit key: red = comments bold = stuff I changed blue = if I don't want to use red. Let's do this thing ...

Hey Sam!! Long time, no critique on my part! Let's see what you got!! The last of my shorts for Cal--I really have no idea how effective this is, because ...

Hey Kris! I saw you put up installment 2! Let's see what you got! "Awake, Dan Kevalis...I have much to say. Awake" Boomed a voice from deep within, each word ...