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Hey Stori! I think this is the story you were talking about, right? Anyway, here goes! A/N: in this version, Aiden doesn't suffer an attack when he's out with Sal. ...

Hey sofi! The title caught my attention so I decided to review! Let's see what you have! [s]It’s supposed to be a bright day, the day she arrives back at ...

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Hey! Here's my review as promised! Sorry if it sounds harsh, I just want to help you become a better writer! Let's do this thing! Veni Vidi Vici [s] I ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! It’s a rule in the forums here that you are supposed to do two reviews before you post anything, but I’m feeling nice, so I’ll ...

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Hey Kaylyn! Here is my critique as promised: a line by line and then the macro ideas! Let's do this thing! Bright, tawdry colors flashed past my uncaring eyes as ...

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Hey again! Back for my critique number two! Now that school is out I can spend more time reading and writing so I decided to continue with your story. I've ...

Overall Okay, as you can see, I didn't find many grammar errors, just a couple awkward wordings. {I pointed out a couple of areas, but my computer erased them. Try ...

1.Total number of books you own? 500-600 2.What was the last book you bought? The City of Bones by Cassandra Clare 3.What was the last book you read? The Virgin ...

Hey Ashley! I'm back to review another one of your brilliant pieces! Let's see what you've got! This is something that I've wanted to try for a while now. I ...

This is definitley always a hard question, so I'll try to list my top books at this moment in time (it'll probably change in the next few minutes). 1) The ...

Hey KJ! I'm scasha! Anyway, I saw this was edited in august, so i've decided to check it out. Let's see what you've got. Prologue June 6, 2008 Mackenzie Valley ...