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1 I stared out the chambers window contemplating what I had just heard, watching the sun paint the sky a ravishing red-gold, as the guard went on babbling the non-sense ...

Hot, humid air produced perspiration on her back as she worked. Birds cawed lamely and her German Shepherd panted weakly in the shade of the old oak. -- lots of ...

Been a while since the last part of my chapter. Sorry about that. Check out the rest of them, and all critiques are welcome! Enjoy. - The Heracia’s are back ...

I watched the sun rise over the trench. Gorgeous rays of red tinted with orange. It looked like spilled watercolour on wet golden paper. Creases folded where the paint ran ...

Chapter One The red carpet was soft beneath her bare feet as Adelaide traversed the hall. Although she had trekked down this corridor thousands of times in her life, this ...

Then Mr. Acorn walked slowly to the door. He pulled it open. A faun was standing at the door. -- okay i suggest saying Mr. Acorn walked slowly to the ...

hey just a few suggestions to add. I too didn't read your previous chapters but this is really good. Try to fit the dialogue of what's going on in her ...

Hey everyone! I just signed up and I was super pumped about this site! I love to write, read, sing in the shower, and swim. My favorite authors are James ...