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Hey Senri! Here's my review key Red= comments bold = words that I think could work better Let's do this thing! Prologue It was the year 1953, and the blizzard ...

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The Six Letter Word I put down my lunch tray at the usual table and sat down. A brunette on my right came out of her secret conference with a ...

Hey again Tanith14! Thanks for reviewing my piece. I'll just look this over for another time to make sure it's perfect :-) Here's my Review Key: Red = Comments Bold ...

Hey LittleBitCold! Welcome! Anyway here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Things/words that I think could work better Here we go! Everyone was talking at once, shouting, screeching, ...

Thanks so much everyone!!! I'm glad you all enjoyed it. I'll definitley fix all of your suggestions, chapter 4 will be up soon, I promise. :-)

Hey GML! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = words/phrases/sentences that I think could work better. Onto the review I cried. Every year it was the same. Him ...

Hey! I'll try not to repeat everything the person above me did. Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = words/phrases/sentences that I think would work better. Depending what ...

Hey ChernobyllyInclined! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Things/words/sentences that I believe would work better. 'Tis my first fantasy. Any and all feedback is terribly appreciated. _____

Hey RoryLengend, Your post looked lonley so I decided to review it, anyway, Here's the key to my review: Red= Comments Bold = words/sentences that I think would work better. ...

Here goes my critique. Key: Red= comments Bold= Words or sentences that I think would fit better (sometimes I simply delete words and put my bold words in their place ...

This picture is from when I went to YMCA Swimming Nationals in Florida in April. I'm in the purple shirt :-)

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Sorry if this is a bit repetitive, but I decided to give this piece an in-depth review. The lengend is: Red= Comments, suggestions Bold = words that I think would ...