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Re: The Duty Chapters 5-10 {Being Edited}
Hey everyone! I have officially finished a rough draft of this story and I will be posting the next five chapters soon. I would really appreciate any and all feedback ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One of "Victims"
Hey deafwriter! Here's my (Author's Note: I didn't know if horror fits in the Action/Adventure forum. This is a horror novel I'm trying to write. This is a bit of ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Done! Who's my next victim?
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Suicide Kills Us All
Hey JFW! My critique is attached below. Regarding your questions above: Character Development: [spoiler] I made a few notes about it but I was confused as to who you were ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: In the shadow of a star - chapter 3 (opening)
Hey again Kris! Let's see what you got! Hi - i am only posting the first 400 words or so, because i am not sure whether or not it works, ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Done! Anyone else?
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger
Hey TL G-Wooster! Here's the review as promised: Review Key Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think could work better. Let's do this thing. Craffter busnes ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Hey all interested people who want critiques! What you can expect when you ask for a critique : I'll do line-edits (grammar, sentence structure). I'll check out the characters. And ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: The Permanent Stand-in #1
Hey kls night! Welcome to YWS! Anyway, I just wanted to remind you that you should do two reviews befor you post any of your work. I'll crit this anyway ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: The Critique Boutique
Hey Suzanne! Can you please critique Speechless ? I'd love you forever :-)
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Iriad (Prologue)
Hey SishBee, Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = words/punctuation/sentences that I've inserted. Let's get this party started! The (Narrator) At the beginning, We were there. After we ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Return to Milantis
Hey Jamie! In-depth review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/sentences/phrases I've inserted that I think could work better with your piece. Here we go! OK, this is just an ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Powers ::3::
Hey Raimunda! Welcome to YWS! You're post looked kind of lonley :( Anyways here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/sentences/punctuation that I've inserted. A.N My third character, ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Giving out Iffy Critiques
Hi Raimunda! Can you review my piece: Speechless ? Thanks so much! Scasha
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: In the shadow of a star Chapter 2 (Revised)
Hey again Kris! Anyway, here's my review. Same key as always! I gave it to my friend ( a serious, book buff & feelings hurter) hehehe - so i have ...
Jun 8, 2008