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Re: Come closer, my pretties. (Re-Opened!)
Hey Le Penguin! Can you crit this please? Chapters 5 and 6? The Duty Chapters 5 and 6 I love you long time!
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: A Conversation over Muffins
Hey again careless! Here's my review, same critique key as always! I know you're not supposed to give an introduction, but I feel that this piece needs one. I hope ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: After the Night
Hey Pinata! Long time no review! Anyway, here's my review key: Red = Commetns Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better with your piece. Let's do this ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Done! I want more!
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: The Scient Witch. Chapter 1, Part 1.
Hey Spazztard! Sorry for the delayed critique. I was away this past weekend, Anyway here's the key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think sound better ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: The Duty Chapters 5-10 {Being Edited}
Again, being edited.
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Elemental Dragons - Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey Whisperer! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = words I've inserted that I think work better. Elemental Dragons *Inspired by the movie, Eragon Prologue Long ago, in ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Remember His Name
Hey Casstic! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better. Let's do this thang! He told me he was in love ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Raisin Hell (2/2)
Hey there Sam! Let's see whatcha got! Same review key as my last one: Carl went back to work on the first day of the Hindu festival of Diwali. He ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Death by Scotch
Hey again Angel, since I read the first one, I wanted to read the sequal. Here's my review! You might be confused if you read this first so go back ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Mutts - Home
Hey GryphonFledgling! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better :-) 3/5/08 090 – Home So much has changed since I ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Pieces of Wooden Glass
Hey Angel! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = WordsI've inserted that I think would work better Pieces of Wooden Glass By Angel of Death His lips were ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: The Ripper's Accomplice
Hey lhighton! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think could work better. Let's do this thing! ‘’Urry up, sir, it’s freezing!’ called ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Dark or Light? One will rule and the other shall fall.
Hey Blackmist! Welcome to YWS! Just to remind you the YWS rules are that you must give two reviews or critiques before you post any of your own work. critiques ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: The Last Questions
Hey carelessaussie13! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better with your piece. Let's do this thing! "What about stars? What ...
Jun 12, 2008